Excellent story! You had so much going on in here and so many interesting ideas. I'm impressed with how you made it all come together.

I *really* liked the opening to this final part.


Meg laughed. "Or you'll do what? Wave your hand and look constipated again?"
Well, we all have to do what we do best. :)

"It's so funny how you talk about the Cage like it's separate from Hell. Such literal little brains. Did you really think that God just put Lucifer in a big box? The Cage is Hell. And Hell is Lucifer. Everything you see? That's him too."
I like this part so much. Again, so many interesting ideas and things to think about.