\o\ I'm glad you liked it! I rarely ever write HP fanfic and I had to go through a copy of the Fight Club script to get a feel for Marla's character again, as it's been a while since I've seen the movie. So it's good to know that I didn't totally kill their characters.

No probs :D I saw that you were putting warnings up on the master list and I was crossposting anyway, so I figured I'd make your life easier.