moragmacpherson (
moragmacpherson) wrote2010-05-17 03:47 pm
The mind boggles...
So I realize that the majority of my f-list is, in fact, European, but I know at least one of you is in an American studies program at university, so I challenge you: how many levels does this sentence fail on?
"In 1763 Thomas Jefferson began the constitutional period by starting to write a new constitution which he called the declaration of independence."
"In 1763 Thomas Jefferson began the constitutional period by starting to write a new constitution which he called the declaration of independence."

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Jefferson did not begin the constituational period. (actually I wonder what the student means by that)
In 1763 Jefferson was far from being a politician, if I recall correctly.
Edit: I should add, that the War of Independence started in 1763.
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Also, you've missed a major glaring error, the one that caused me to open a fifth of bourbon last night.
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Errr, what error?
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